A good start, Zoe! I might have moved the egg on the left in a bit closer to avoid the crop, but overall I think the scale is pretty good and the value has nice contrast and application. A really nice job with the drop cloth and in particular the differentiation of the table top surface.
Some form issues with the box and egg so use your photo to aid the accuracy of the rendering. The cylinder could feel a bit more round too.
The key to rooting the images in the space is the shadows at the base of each. Check out this example for reference: http://jtravers.com/value15katie.html
A good start, Zoe! I might have moved the egg on the left in a bit closer to avoid the crop, but overall I think the scale is pretty good and the value has nice contrast and application. A really nice job with the drop cloth and in particular the differentiation of the table top surface.
Some form issues with the box and egg so use your photo to aid the accuracy of the rendering. The cylinder could feel a bit more round too.
The key to rooting the images in the space is the shadows at the base of each. Check out this example for reference: http://jtravers.com/value15katie.html